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  • Other Poetry Re: Bigger than man

    I really seriously love this poem. It is like you are telling a story, and a sad one, at that. I love it, though. I don't know how to correct ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Despair

    Overall I like this poem, it is dramatic and I love the words in it. But, it should have more descriptions of the pain you feel and why you feel ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: 'Lo, all.

    I'd love for you to do mine.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Will Review For Food Re: Questions about "Will Review for Food"

    I used to post review requests on peoples page. Yes, I'm Wind-Rider, so please help direct me on this forum. I need help.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    I tried to correct my poem.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Free reviews over here! ...Anyone?

    Review my Nine Hearts.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: ---

    I loved it. I feel deep sympathy for the "character" of this other poem. I loved it.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Squills - The YWS News Re: Watching television 'damages the heart'

    cooool. So does it really? Because I love to get on the computer. And I am perfectly fine.

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Taking Over.

    O didn't get it. So please tell me what it was about? I know what its about about. But why did the president declare himself president for life if it ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Poem A Day...

    I loved it I didn't like it. I write my best poems at night. That's the praise but the review is that it should be revised and super sized. Your ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cry for me

    I liked the rhythm in the words and I loved it. But what is it about? How does it imply to reality and fantasy? I didn't get it but I ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Secret Society of Bad Haircuts and Messed Up Eyebrows

    I liked this. It talks about not caring about self image, I am big on that. And it is rather funny at the same time. jeep writing. I loved it ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rejection

    I like it. but what is it about? I like the rhythm of the words and the openness of it. I am very big on that. I love it.

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fairytale

    This is one of those poems that do not rhyme but still has the rhythm that only the best of poetry possess.

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Autumn Blush

    It sure does I feel like I am warm inside. I like it.

    Mar 9, 2011


laughter is the best medicine, not apples.
— paigey