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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In Between

    It is a really good poem. But I kind of got lost about the feeling of it. Really, I did. Is it about choosing between two boys? Two friends? You ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Love You

    The rhythm in this poem was getting real old when I was reading it, not to be harsh. And you used though two times and that takes away from the ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Why Hide the Eye

    Most people cover there eyes this day. I really like this and I love the hair on the picture. I can't say anything about the picture that is not right ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Summer Girl

    I like this drawing, seriously good job. I think that the angle that the girl is sitting in could be better. But I really like it. I do no lie.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Man with Glove

    This man with glove is really good. I sometimes wish that I was focused enough to draw that good. I really like it.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: A song I wrote

    I really like these lyrics and I think that they can be improved a little bit, but only a little because I believe in keeping the original lyrics. I love ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Got thicket juice in my pocket.

    I don't really get that. I don't. but I love the words in this poem, the words are really good. But what is the motive of this poem?

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Read This! It's Great!

    It sounds more about popular mean girls like the book The Clique. I like this poem ,really. I can really figure out the dog parts of the poem, though. I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Best Friend..yeah right

    I love this so much. This poem is full with so much emotion that I really, really love this poem. I am following you, I am telling you now. I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cupcake

    I LOVE CUPCAKES. I mean who doesn't they would have to have something wrong with their taste buds. Oh man, I love me some cupcakes. You did a great job ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: An Ode To Mathematics

    I like this poem, but I don't get it. What is it about? Who is it about? But the most important of all questions. Why did you write it? If ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Other Re: The Serendipity Theory

    I am a believer in this theory. I have been thinking about it a long time, but I just didn't know the right word for my idea. I like this, ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Little ol' me? Birthday girl? Pssh...

    I love this, mostly because my birthday is coming up. But, I really like it, it deals with the real emotions. but, I have not been in school since I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Geeks

    I really like this poem. It really describes me. Because sometimes, I play with toys. *Hides blond headed Barbie behind her back*. And some people think that I am weird. ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Sweet reviews from a Muffin

    You can review my poetry on my profile. I don't know how to do links, so you will have to go on my profile and the like. Thanks :D

    Mar 11, 2011


What orators lack in depth they make up for in length.
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