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Re: Above the Lake
I like this poem. really, I had no idea there was a like button but I am going to press it. I like the description and the nature in this ...
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Re: Keep Moving
It wasn't too painful to read but it was sad. I am not good on harsh reviews but it could do with more rhymes and more lines. I really like ...
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Re: You and Me
Oh I really like this poem. What is the inspiration for it? It is really poetic and nice and it has a nice rhythm sort of like song lyrics. I ...
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Re: Colors
This poem is really good, and I hope you guys win. I really think that the last three, umm, stanzas are the best. As far as my poetic eyes can ...
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Re: The song of my life
I like these lyrics, the song of my life. You should really make it into a real song. Like, does it have a rhythm? Because I am sure with the ...
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Re: That Sacred Slut
It is really sad and the mood of the poem is dark. but it is definitely poetic. And I don't usually review this type of poems so I don't really ...
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Re: Guardians At Night
I haven't dealt with the loss of a person only the loss of a pet. And I held that pet dearly to my heart. He was the best, and I ...
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Re: Serenity in Neutrality
I like this poem, really good. It is sort of a riddle, but I like it. You should explain it farther, though and make it a little simpler because I ...
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Re: there she inscribed
What is this poem about?? it is very descriptive and I like it. but what is it about? The moral, the motive and lastly where did you get the idea ...
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Re: Seperation
I really like this poem, it deals with separation. I haven't dealt in that situation before. I have experienced the death of a pet, but not separation from a friend. ...
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Re: Japan
I love this poem, it really describes what they must have went through. I saw it on the news, it was really sad. I can't imagine myself there, in that ...
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Re: Park Bench Pageant
Is this about littering? I am so guilty of littering. Really, sometimes I can't help it or I don't want to walk to the nearest trash can. Which might be ...
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Re: Sanity vs. Love
It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...
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Re: Hey, Mother.
I thought it was a vampire poem. It was actually made feel queezy. And the descriptions were so good I feel like I am going to throw up. No lie, ...
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Re: Black and White?
I like the one that says external on it, it is really pretty. Is the girl a fairy or something else. I try to understand art.
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