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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Above the Lake

    I like this poem. really, I had no idea there was a like button but I am going to press it. I like the description and the nature in this ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Keep Moving

    It wasn't too painful to read but it was sad. I am not good on harsh reviews but it could do with more rhymes and more lines. I really like ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You and Me

    Oh I really like this poem. What is the inspiration for it? It is really poetic and nice and it has a nice rhythm sort of like song lyrics. I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Colors

    This poem is really good, and I hope you guys win. I really think that the last three, umm, stanzas are the best. As far as my poetic eyes can ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The song of my life

    I like these lyrics, the song of my life. You should really make it into a real song. Like, does it have a rhythm? Because I am sure with the ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Sacred Slut

    It is really sad and the mood of the poem is dark. but it is definitely poetic. And I don't usually review this type of poems so I don't really ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Guardians At Night

    I haven't dealt with the loss of a person only the loss of a pet. And I held that pet dearly to my heart. He was the best, and I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Serenity in Neutrality

    I like this poem, really good. It is sort of a riddle, but I like it. You should explain it farther, though and make it a little simpler because I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: there she inscribed

    What is this poem about?? it is very descriptive and I like it. but what is it about? The moral, the motive and lastly where did you get the idea ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seperation

    I really like this poem, it deals with separation. I haven't dealt in that situation before. I have experienced the death of a pet, but not separation from a friend. ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Japan

    I love this poem, it really describes what they must have went through. I saw it on the news, it was really sad. I can't imagine myself there, in that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Park Bench Pageant

    Is this about littering? I am so guilty of littering. Really, sometimes I can't help it or I don't want to walk to the nearest trash can. Which might be ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sanity vs. Love

    It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hey, Mother.

    I thought it was a vampire poem. It was actually made feel queezy. And the descriptions were so good I feel like I am going to throw up. No lie, ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Black and White?

    I like the one that says external on it, it is really pretty. Is the girl a fairy or something else. I try to understand art.

    Mar 15, 2011


Nothing of me is original. I am the combined effort of everybody I've ever known.
— Chuck Palahniuk