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Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1
I've been waiting to read this, and I wasn't disappointed. I mean who wouldn't like a good story about dragons? Dragons rock. I think that this was actually better than ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Beneath this smile
I love, .love, love these lyrics. They are full of deep emotion and the lyrics are the type that I like. I love these lines: Deep in my heart, There’s ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Wild Emotions - "Affectus Torva"
I can't say the parts that I liked because I like them all, really. I think that you added lots of emotion into this piece and that, above all, is ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Definition of Freedom
I love poems about freedom, and this is one of the best ones. I love these lines: Freedom is a pearl white shark, swimming depp into the great blue, using ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Blue Eyes
I love this, it made me wish I had blue eyes. Its the way you describe their capturing essence, I think. Anyway I love these lines: You feed me- cerulean ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Favorite poem?
I love this even thought it is a old nursery rhyme, and I absolutely can't stand owls. It is catchy. A wise old owl lived in an oak The more ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: River
I like this poem, it is good you can imagine yourself as something. I think if I had to imagine myself as something it would be the wind. Because who ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: The Life Of A Writer
I loved this script I would like to see it as a short comedy show that comes on when commercials are supposed to. It would be that good. I love ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Human's Treasure
I like this, really I think that you should enter this in a contest one day. I love these lines: Let humans' mind wander to what they think fits the ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: i am a rifle
I liked this one and I can't say that I had a favorite line because I loved them all. I think that this is a really good poem. Very dramatic.
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Running With Music
I really like this, did you just make it up in your head? I think that this could be a good song. My favorite lines are. Encaptured by the movement, ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: The End
I think that you did a good job writing this. It has a very sad atmosphere on it. I love it, though.
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: why do i stay??
I really love this. This is my favorite part: Beat me with your words, until your abhorrence can no longer be contained, A new black eye that needs to be ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
I like this, and for a poem lacking big words it portrays a strong feeling of emotion that captures the life of a teenage girl. The lines I really like ...
Mar 22, 2011
