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I really really really like this poem because it was full of fine imagery!!!! I love these lines: Faces of beauty but souls made of ice, they have eyes that ...

I love this poem, to me it is more of a story than a poem.. I think that you should add more feeling and emotion to this poem, it has ...

I was lost and I couldn't see My heart was lost deep inside of me I couldn't find a place to rest Than you came along And you found me ...

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I actually really like this, it seems good to me. And the atmosphere of this poem reminds me somewhat of the beach. The calmness and the descriptions. I love it!!!! ...

The wind swirled and danced in the sky My heart pounded and raced The thunder seemed to consume the world The sky turned shades of blue that have never been ...

Forever you said as we looked at the sunset I shook my head Knowing how that word produced lies You smiled at my defiance Laughing at how I put up ...

I love the hair and the eyes, amazing!!!!!!! You should draw more, because I am really liking it!!!!!!

This is very nice, really!!!!!!!!!!!! I really love the trees, to me they are very realistic!!!!

Welcome Jere!!!!! :elephant: I am also a teenage geek, so I will gladly except you into this humble abode (if that even sound right) Hope you have a nice stay ...

This is good, but not really descriptions in it. I would really like to know more about the twins and the Mariah. I think that you should add more to ...

Soooooooo, true

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This poem brought tears to my eyes, and I really think that it is good. My heart started to race as I continued reading, no exaggeration, trying to figure out ...

I really love the way you tell the tale of the prince, and the way you made the stanzas and the wording in the poem. I think it does have ...