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Pretty much sums up what I think when I go outside. I love the last three lines.

Everything Vee said explained it all. The poem had epic imagery, and beautiful rhythm. I loved it, the best thing I've reviewed since my own poems, really I am having ...

I love this poem, it has perfect imagery to me. I can't give out any nitpicks because I am not a grammar queen. All I can say is that I ...

what you just wrote is SO TRUE. Show not tell. That is the best of advice!!! :D

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Hey, I am Robin lee, but you can call me lee :D . I am glad that you came upon this site. Personally I think that everyone should join, everyone ...

I love your poem, its awesome. It really describes that feeling, and it has simply perfect imagery!!! I really like the first lines, and the metaphors are my favorite part!! ...

I really liked this poem, I've never seen the first version, but I like this one. I like the moral and the way you presented the poem. I can't pick ...

I really liked the imagery in your poem, that's the best thing to happen in a poem, I think that you should have added more because I would have liked ...

I love your poem, it has a great sense of imagery. I can't say my favorite lines because I loved every single one. I was hypnotized by the words, they ...

The lighting is what makes it amazing. I love it!!!!!

It was good, the things that I noticed were already pointed out. Other than that it is good, I think this is the first science fiction that I have read. ...

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I really like this poem, it is a message many teens try to get out today, including me!!. Nice job on the rhyming and I really like these lines!!: You ...