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This.was.Awesome. Great idea and pretty funny, too!!!!

Everything I noticed was pretty much cleared up. Other than that you are really good at the soft touchy sorts of poems if that is what you were aiming for. ...

I love this poem!!! Good job, I am so liking!!!!!

I really like this poem and I can totally relate. But growing up is the best part in life. At least I think so.

I love these lyrics, very good and beautiful rhythm. I could just hear the song forming in my head. that's mostly because I want to be a songwriter.

Great job I really like this poem!!! Its very creepy at the thought of having a stalker.

The things that I noticed have already been pointed out. I really like the way you play with words, very creative. I can't quote and paste or whatever to show ...

This is beautifully written and expresses some of the thoughts that gather in my mind sometimes. Very good job!!!

This poem is so poetically beautiful!!!! I think that you should keep writing, you make such awesome poems!!! This one is my favorite!!! I would love to live in that ...

Very, very good!!! You put into words the exact same feelings that I have!!!!

I love it. awesome and very poetic at the same time. But not in the regular poetic way, more of in your own style. And thats exactly what I love ...

Welcome I am Robin lee, but everyone just calls me lele. I hope you have fun on the site!! It is awesome and it has lots of smilies. I am ...

The reason that I don't use grammar is because I think, in my taste, the poem flows better. Periods only make you stop and then go. But I want the ...

I love this. Now if only my hands would alow me to actually follow the steps. (;