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Nice I like it!! For a poem that just popped into your head, its pretty good. keep on writing!!!

Very sad but very well written and very good also.

I loved this poem, greatly written and very good with the imagination. keep writing!!!!

I love this poem, it is full with emotion and very good imagery. I noticed little things but they were cleared up by the people that reviewed before me. Overall, ...

Very good. Is there more? I would love to read more. I really love the imagery, I can see it. Did you make up the names yourself??

I love the theme and idea of this poem. I also love the rhymes. I can't point out any grammar mistakes of something like that, in my eyes this was ...

Genius, I love it. I know its been done, but hasn't everything. Keep writing, this made me laugh with the lyric choices I am so liking.

I like the drawings, I don't have any thing to criticize because I can't even draw myself.

this was a lovely read, I look forward to reading more of the chapters. but I suggest making paragraphs. it was hard to keep up with where I was reading. ...

Their were no mishaps that I could detect. Al in all, I loved every letter of this. No bluff. I found myself drawn to the screen with every entry. Though ...

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I like this, the only thing that I have to say about it is that it needs a little bit more imagery. Parts of it seemed a little dry, and ...

I like this kind of imagery, short, to the point, and very very interesting title. Al in all I like the poem very well and everything I noticed has already ...

I think that the overall paper was good, there were some very interesting facts that I never knew. On the other hand I think that you should try to be ...

I wasn't expecting her to die. Everything that I noticed was already pointed out. The imagery was very good, romantic and I loved the sadness of the poem. Very good.!!!It ...