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Re: The Fallen Saint
Your poem is very beautiful!! I loved reading it, its very poetic. No nitpicks, because I really couldn't find any, except for some capitalization at the first parts of your ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Personality
I loved reading this whole poem!! Your poem was amazing, I really loved your imagery, and the way you spaced out the words. I made me capture that persons feelings!! ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Died And Tried Tried And Died.
This has to be my favorite poem of yours!! I really really loved reading it!! I couldn't see any errors, to my eye. But I really enjoyed reading it!!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Fool For Love
This was awesome!! I loved reading it!!! I liked it because you had so much stuff to do with it, so much passion. I could feel his hurt, and how ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Paper Cups
I loved reading your poem!! It was short, but it had awesome imagery!!
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Hang On Tight
Wow, just, wow!! This poem was a good follow up to the other poem I read of your, Patterns and Colors!! And let me just say again, you writing is ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Patterns And Colors
I loved reading your poem, it's beautiful and very poetic!! Butterfly, flutter by, Wings flapping against the wind, Softy and yet so delicate, Patterns and Colors, Patterns and Colors. I ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The 'Real' Reason for 4-H
HAhahah, your poem made me laugh in some parts, and it also made me realize the perks of being in a club or a team!! your poem is very light ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: No More
This piece is very beautiful and very good!! I loved reading it, because it was so full of passion and this is my absolute favorite part of your poem!! Here ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Things I'm Afraid Of
Your poem is very sad, but true. I'm afraid I'll be too weak to stand up and let my voice be heard, even though every second I don't part of ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Grace
This is beautiful, it's like taking on a lifetime of quotes in one breath, you know. It's just eye widening and beautiful. Keep writing!! There's not much to nitpick,so I'll ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: all the pretty things
Considering all of the reviews you've gotten, nothing else can really be said about your piece. To me it was perfect, I enjoyed reading it!!
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: unstoppable you
I love this its so good. Thats what I see in you. You are unstopable.
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Not Forever
Good job!! I loved reading this, it may be simple but it makes you think!! I loved this part!! I won't love you forever. I'd rather love you today, praying ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
I was confused at the first part, but other than that I really loved reading this. It makes you think!!
Aug 19, 2011