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Everything that I noticed has already been explained by the persons above me. But I can just say how good this was. perfect imagery and word choice, in my opinion. ...

I love the rhythm of the words, the rhymes fit nicely into your poem. I also like the truth in it, because these days these words are true. hope this ...

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Did you edit these. because these look really good!!!

I love the detailed imagery, and your word choice is....very good. I am not good at nitpicking, but I hope that the ones above me did, and it made up ...

It reflected sisterly affection in an easy to read and very good manner. Great job, keep writing!!!!

Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!

Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!

Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!

Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!

As usual, the things I noticed have been picked out by the eyes of others before me, saving me time and words. So all there is left for me to ...

it was said, very sad. I think that emotion was weaved into your words.

I love this, very side. One question how could a lie turn into deceit? Anyway, great piece full of emotion and all things that make poems good. Imagery, great wording, ...

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Wow, epic. I didn't know that you could draw that good. I can hardly do a scrape on a piece of paper. In fact, me an paper only get along ...