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Re: Bitterly-sweet
Everything that I noticed has already been explained by the persons above me. But I can just say how good this was. perfect imagery and word choice, in my opinion. ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Always and forever
I love the rhythm of the words, the rhymes fit nicely into your poem. I also like the truth in it, because these days these words are true. hope this ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
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Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: On My Way To Ben & Jerry's
Did you edit these. because these look really good!!!
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Battle Scars
I love the detailed imagery, and your word choice is....very good. I am not good at nitpicking, but I hope that the ones above me did, and it made up ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Sisterly Affection
It reflected sisterly affection in an easy to read and very good manner. Great job, keep writing!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: echoes
As usual, the things I noticed have been picked out by the eyes of others before me, saving me time and words. So all there is left for me to ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
it was said, very sad. I think that emotion was weaved into your words.
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Turns Into
I love this, very side. One question how could a lie turn into deceit? Anyway, great piece full of emotion and all things that make poems good. Imagery, great wording, ...
May 26, 2011 -
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May 26, 2011 -
Re: Roaring Dragon
Wow, epic. I didn't know that you could draw that good. I can hardly do a scrape on a piece of paper. In fact, me an paper only get along ...
May 26, 2011