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Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Never Again (cyber-bullying)
I am not going to cut back on my review just because you are my sister. lol. There was a lot of spelling errors and I'm sure if you read ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Woe
I love your poem, its really good. I can see the emotions in it!!! They won’t even say “bless you,” After I sneeze. < That's my favorite part!!I think it ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: angel of fate
I love this, its amazingly awesome!!! This is my favorite part Why do you make me color in the lines? I am an artist my pallet is fine. I love ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Dancing Among Dreams
I love this, its awesome!!!! You are an incredibly talented writer. My favorite part is this one: An awakening: It appears as if you've found Yourself in the eyes of ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Has Ben, Never Was Chapter 3
You need to write more. I am hooked after three chapters, and that's good. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Now, the wait until the next chapter.....
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Has Ben, Never Was Chapter 2
I really loved this one. This is my favorite part.. However, this was the unknown, and sometimes, the enemy you know is better than the one you don’t. I am ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Has Ben, Never Was
I loved reading this, I was trying to find out what was going to happen at the end. She shouldn't have went in the car. I am NOT getting addicted ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
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Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Happiness
I loved reading this, from the imagery, to the way you arranged the words. The way you wrote this really drew me in, and your choice of topic and the ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Your Pride
I love it so much. Its sad and touching but also your poem has a perfect sense of independence. I love your poem.. and keep writing!!!
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
I love your poem, its has amazing imagery. Good job on it!!! I love the last part, very nice ending in my opinion.
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Speed Drawings
Wow, I like it!! It must be fun to be able to draw like that. I need lessons O_O
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Letter to the World
This.Is.Deep. I love it!!! It almost made me cry, and during some parts I couldn't read on because of that. But I did, and I love it!!!
Jul 25, 2011
