leebass

Not sure why, but I think of the name 'Harry'. Okay it's a guy, from the same era as WWI, well educated and well mannered though not stuck up. He's ...

I really enjoyed it :). I like how the tension builds after Mark fights the first kid and you handle the action really well. It's not overly described. There's a ...

Hi, did you post this in the right place? Are you asking for this to be critiqued? To answer your question, personally i enjoy listening to music while typing and ...

Hi, I found the notes very informative and interesting, the only thing was that i think you used commas quite a lot and sometimes unnecessarily. I'll put it in pink. ...