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Thanks for the reviews! Yeah, the present is supposed to be shoes because he lost his in the accident. Which partly happened becuase of him not tying his shoelaces. I ...

Hi, thanks for reviewing. I was trying to make out that he just doesn't remember the actual accident, as far as he knows Rachel is just some woman that comes ...

I'm afraid i don't write poetry, fantasy or magic realism fantasy, it's more just general fiction i suppose. I haven't heard any of the author's you posted haha. Oh yeah, ...

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Hi. At one point you write 'highter' instead of 'higher' which is a small mistake. I thought overall it was good and you portayed the girl's apprehension well. The only ...

It looks like your trying to go a bit 'House of Leaves' with the blue words and the different font sizes. This sort of thing can work really well in ...

I liked it. You really get the sense of the emotions you were feeling at the time. I could vividly see you standing at the pier and there's a feeling ...

Hi, i will be submitting a few pieces of work soon. Authors i find inspiring are: Philip K Dick, Raymond Chandler, David Foster Wallace, Mark Danielewski, Katherine Dunn... and i ...

It forces me to use my brain.

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Stolen this from another forum because i thought it was fun. Basically you write down the last words of somebody you're about to shoot, and perhaps what you say afterwards ...

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... explode into icecream. Her enemy ...