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Hey, Lee-Anna here! Oh, my gosh, I loved this! I can't find anything to nit-pick :). I just have one question, though--how are you supposed to pronounce Razhel? I can ...

A cat became infatuated with a man, to begin with. No one doubted her affections for him. So, one day, the cat decided to confront the goddess Venus and request ...

Aww, he's so cute!! I want a chinchilla, but my mom says cats and dogs are the only pets I can own until I move out :(.

Hey, Lee-Anna here! Since the rest of the reviewers have all ready commented on the length, details, and the Is not being capitalized, I'm going to critique the grammar. "Jango?" ...

You want me to pick just one?! Okay, here's my list: 1. Mortal Instruments trilogy by Cassandra Clare 2. Hush, Hush by Becca Fitzpatrick 3. Warriors books by Erin Hunter ...

Okay, I added more detail and didn't reveal as much information, considering it is a prologue. Thanks for all the help, guys! :D

I like it, I just think it might be a little--not better, but...more detailed, I guess that's the right word--if some things were shaded. Like the pupils, necklace, headband, etc. ...

Hey, Lee-Anna here! Great job! I like that you're using present tense. I haven't seen a lot of stories using present tense. I don't really see any nitpicks that no ...

Heyy, Lee-Anna here! First, I'd like to say you've got an okay idea going here. I'm just going to help with the grammatical errors. I sing to the lord of ...

This is so short, but it almost made me cry!! I love it! Might I add, I'm not that great at writing poems, so I'm not actually reviewing this...I just ...

Okay, to Captain.Classy: I changed the first sentence. Hope it sounds better now! And, yeah, that cell phone sentence did sound kind of odd. Oh, and I specified how she ...

Ahhh, you're right!! I kinda put the wrong character in this story.... She isn't supposed to be blind...I must have gotten confused with all my stories. I shall fix that ...

I have a story called Written in Blood! It's romance fiction (though the prologue doesn't exactly have love in it). I'd REALLY love it if you would review it. Here's ...

"I wanna try!" a girl yelled merrily. "May I, please?" "Samantha, are you sure you want to try it?" a guy, who was a little older than the girl, questioned. ...

***Great. Another old story. -_- "What are you doing?" a girl inquired angrily in the background, staring at them, bewildered. "Bethany, I...was just kissing her..." the guy explained after he ...