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Thank you all so much for the replies!! I never dreamed people would actually praise my haiku :D. You should have seen me when I saw the things you all ...

*I have to write two haiku for my writing class. I've written all these, and I want you to tell me which two you think I should turn in, if ...

Hey, Greg!! Welcome to YWS! I'm Lee-Anna, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :D This is good! I like the idea of the story so far. I haven't really ...

Hey, WalkInTheSun! I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll try. :) I like this poem!! I like the idea for the story/poem. This is something I caught, though: ...

Hey there! Welcome to my little reviewing place! :D I'll review anything except scripts (sorry, I really stink at scripts). I focus mostly on the grammatical errors in posts. I ...

I slowly sat in your warm lap and played with your shirt collar. You entwined your fingers with mine knowing our deadline was near. "I love you, you know," you ...

Hey, Siona! I really like this! It's very well written. I agree with fiction903, though. I think you need a few more commas in some places. Once again, great job! ...

Hey, Siona! This is hilarious !! Almost as good as Llamas Online, lol. Okay, just a few grammatical errors: Okay, so I was on this balcony and I'm waiting for ...

Hey, Classy! First, I'd like to say this a great story idea! I do kind of agree with BondGirl007, however. How does he even know anything about her? And, since ...

Hello, Siona!! That was stellar! :D. The only thing that I saw that no one else nit-picked is: AS we are born we chase every breath a chase every heart ...

Hey, Smiles! I accept your challenge! I'm not going to tear it apart, though.... It was really good! :) I haven't read chapter one, but I will soon! There was ...

Hey, Singer! I really like it! :D Plus, I didn't catch any grammatical errors. All I can say is great job!!

Hey, Lydia! This was really awesome, but also sad. Just one grammatical error I noticed: Friends and loved ones voices say I think ones and friends should be possesive. It ...

Hey, Shelby! This was pretty wicked!! :D I agree with BondGirl007, though, on the whole not-much-like-a-prologue thing. Oh, there's only one error I spotted: I jumped ahead and spin around. ...

Aww, this is sad!! But it's actually really stellar :). Just a few typos and/or grammatical errors I noticed: “Oh my God!” Cried Clair, running up and tackling me into ...