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Re: that soft classic music
The image this creates is really powerful and I loved it! It actually reminded me of a book I read (If I Stay) that includes a car crash where the ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Ballroom
DONT CHANGE IT! i love it, who cares if the stupid people out there dont get it:P i think you have an awesome idea here and i like the way ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Before I Die
I think you've got a good theme here for your poem, but the rhyming seems a bit forced unfortunately. Is believe in yourself 'cause you are you Don't let anyone ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Imagine This
Imagine this; sitting on a high branch with a clear, blue sky above you, green forests has far as you can see behind you, the vast ocean ahead. There’s not ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: How Can I?
WOW! I adore this, and think its very well written. So emotional and from the soul:) The words flow really nicely and it achieves its purpose in communicating the feelings ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Rosy Painted Butterflies
I wrote this around the time of the Victorian bushfires, so quite awhile ago:) My friend wanted me to post something and I dont really have time to write something ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: to be loved part 1
I totally agree with above, try to improve the story line (such as from my first comment), and defiantly improve your gramma:) good luck! -Layla Flame
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
HEYY! xD I just realised you have a very "story-telling" kind of way of writing, if you know what i mean:P or maybe its just cuz of the little red ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: to be loved part 1
I think you've got a nice idea here, although there are some spelling mistakes and a few small bits that could be improved. Overall, I think its well done for ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: The Alarm
I love how you've captured an innocent hate we all share in this clever peom:) Very well done and I loved reading it. Keep writing! -Layla Flame
Mar 31, 2011