laylaflame

I really like this ; short and sweet. I don't understand it, but I like it:) Welldone. -Layla Flame

I really like this!!! I'm going to have to re-read it over and over until I get everything thats in there, but thats what makes it so great! that is ...

Actually, I just re-read you peom, and now that I've gone over it a bit I can see the: long line, short line, pause, long line, short line, pause, pattern ...

I think you may have to give a bit more infomation.. I dont know what your trying to convey in this=\ Rhythm seems a little off too.. maybe try: (though ...

Hey there!:D I'll be honest, I'm not very good at reviewing in detail:) But I'll try my best.. Dry; Drier than my chapped lips Good use of repetition through out ...

True i didn't really put much thought into this, but I did have meaning behind my words. This peom is from the perpective of not just one woman but the ...

Wow . I'm sorry but I dont feel qualified to critique that:) Only thing I can say is maybe put an extra line between paragraphs because it seems to 'clump'. ...

haha welldone:) I loved it, thought I did have to re-read the bit about bending over forward as I didnt know what you ment. Maybe changing the words there to ...

*** Inspired by Kristin Cashore's 'Graceling' and 'Fire' *** Vivian is a 16year old girl living in a fantasy world similar to our middle ages. This is the story of ...

Hey! Im going to be honest, ok? I do like it and it was amusing to read. Loved the first sentence:P But.. it didn't flow as nicely as I know ...

awesommme:) pure genius...

well i think.. that some of these people dont have an imagination!:P i get it! as i just told you:) but if you can be bothered.. you should write more ...

Simply put; I like it. :)

thankyou for all your comments:D There very helpful:) just like to explain my choice of words: Because upon that page, you wrote your name, More beautiful than words, I mean ...

MWHAHA! I FINALY CHECKED IT! Is this the one you ment? Anyway it is now:) ... I like it. I sometimes feel the same way, actually when i was younger ...