-
Re: maybe it's just me
This is a nice, emotional piece. The loneliness aspect is portrayed really well, along with a sense of self-disbelief. I also liked the aspect of the tears turning from tears ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Ants
I like this, I like the links that you make to humans and ants. I like how you're exploring the links between them both and giving the ants human characteristics. ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Victim
Lilyyyyy :) I thought this was amazing. The idea for the story was great, the twist was good. As it's been mentioned before it was short, but straight to the ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: I just joined, and i'm excited :D
i'm a new user, i'm trying to get to grips with the site, so please be patient with me :D my name is laura, I joined mostly to read a ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: First post, just expressing emotion, not very good :/
A storm of confusion rages inside my head, I toss and turn whilst lay inside my bed. I long for some form of salvation, A life boat in this vast ...
Jan 9, 2011
