laurawillrock

It was a good poem about a guy that lost his love and went to "a new world". It was really sad though. I especially liked how you described the ...

THe poems was well put together and gave out feeling. I feel like you did a good job and if the grammar was better it would be perfect.

A very good description of yourself in poetic form. the poem was great but you could used more words than "look at me". Keep on writing i especially liked it.

I i was hooked on it from the beginning. That was an interesting type of story. I am looking forward to seeing more.

It was good it could be a little more descriptive but i liked it. I liked the grammar and i could relate to it.

Lovely. It was a good story and a poem. There isnt much to correct it was well put.

I liked how it was put together. It gave me a good sense of the ocean. However it needed better description. Other than that it sounded good.

It was more than a good peice of work it was beautiful. You had put it together great with repitition, imagery, and irony. If your grammar was a little better ...

It was really interesting. It kept me here. What you have to do is brush up on your grammar though.

lets go out lets go to town we have so much to see like the sycamore trees I want to go on this ride because i have you by my ...

I have been experiencing writers block lately too. I dont know why.

Absolutely not. These people may have commited great crimes but death penalty might not be the answer. being locked up for life is enough to help a population and for ...

-----I have noticed that we have portfolios so im going to make sure the very first thing i put in it is something about me.----- I go by alot of ...

It was great. You did a good job with imagery and i really felt the pain. You put together a good peice of work and i mean that in a ...