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He reacted in an abnormal, unusual sort of way, not how I would have expected. He seemed passionate. He seemed like he actually cared. For once in his life; he ...

Scattered seeds in the snow Beautiful line. You've used alliteration very well here. xx

This is why I love poetry. Painting a picture with words! Keep on writing!

I am a little bit confused as to whether you know him or not because at first you say you do and then you change your mind. Other than that ...

This is like an editorial. I LOVE IT! You are so funny. You should make more which are like rants. Would be a good read for me :D

Define: cute. Couldn't you be a little bit more descriptive don't you reckon? number one reason that i love him is because when i lie awake at night i match ...

Back in February half term I was given the opportunity to go skiing in Austria. Let’s just say I don’t think I am naturally gifted at skiing. After many trips ...

I just want to read more and more and more to be honest with you! Please continue this piece! I was captured by your title Fluorescence as it is very ...

I think the title is such a shame. I mean it is a good title of course and a romantic one at that. However, is it just me or is ...

I think there is a little bit of a muddle with your tenses. Sometimes I think are you talking about the past or the present. Overall, well done :D

Back in February half term I was given the opportunity to go skiing in Austria. Let’s just say I don’t think I am naturally gifted at skiing. After many trips ...

I know that it says romantic short stories; that was very short! He was perfect, I was not. That has got to be my favourite sentence because it is so ...

Next time use paragraphs. I know that you made mistakes and your grammar was awful. However, I can see how much you wanted to do well. I am sure that ...

This poem is very engaging! I love how abstract it actually is. I thought from the title that it might be a little cliche and therefore, dull. However, I was ...

I am a newbie! Hi everyone!