lalalucky

this usage of short lines throughout your poetry are so effective in giving a punch! much of these word choices & the length of these lines make the poems feel ...

my submission: on becoming milkweeds

(4.04) on becoming milkweeds relentless slumbers embedded on sheets nearly abrade my dreams of flight: my steps sloping downwards, shaping a mountain to walk upon. then settled on earth's bonds ...

(4.03 / finished: 11:00 pm) (untitled) you let the door open apart, so sunlight sings through the crescent. it crystalizes dust scattered in the air that we forget, but never ...

though you say you're no poet, all of these poems have been great! i enjoy the varied vocabulary that makes the poetry engaging, while the overall language & word choices ...

goodness the rendering is so so good!! the face is drawn so lovely as well!!

(4.2.26 / finished: 11:09/11:50 pm) note: i took out a bit of my portion to the ending so i finished very late painful knees / sense to pray / faint ...

"i don't want to lose you to electronic memory boxes / all we are covered in a glass sheet; our only interaction" genuinely there are no words for me to ...

(4.1.26 / written 10:50 pm) after the deep end you spiral forward with hands reaching back to your face tear-rusted, slacking deeply, with peeled skin dead on top of whatever-days-ago ...

the way these poems portray grief & loss so intimately is haunting. these are all so beautifully written with depth that speak very clear through the prose, and overall, i ...

congrats!!

i made a sandwhich today. lunch meat, lettuce, & mayonnaise - i beat all that on square bread and called myself god.

my thread: (30/26) (i completed the poems on the day they were posted but forgot to numbered them. i went back at 4/28 to number the poems that weren't numbered ...

(3/21/2026) look at me. your bruises marks you your bruises exfoliates me your scars make you real your scars signed me dead your expression folded into / my impression open ...

ill try this out. sign me up :>