lalalucky

it's brilliant how all of these poems are a piece to an overarching story! not only the commitment to one story feels unique, but also its way of telling a ...

4.17 what is my heartbeat (if its not yours) you can't feel a heartbeat at a distance. you think a ball bouncing on the ground with every force of your ...

I like that with a poem of yours, they are most often going to have an underlying story for us to follow along. The usage of ambiguity as an ending ...

love the occasional incorporation of culture such as using another language or having a reference to an cultural event! to use this knowledge of culture (born or not born into ...

4.16. dirty kids sneaking out from the creek into streets tattooed with seed-bumps for us to grow over fear, trace goosebumps   popping them with overarching burnt tires. instead i ...

these are great poems so far! the flow of them just sounds lovely and consistent! even with the overall shortness, they all feel completed pieces that already says enough with ...

4.15. leap of faith my leap of faith is when i trip off the curb of the street. at least then i'd be the closest to standing than falling deeper ...

your poetry is so rich with emotion!! i love how very individualized your poetry are to you specifically, due to these specific memories, experiences, and emotion being vivid & clear. ...

4.14. who told you you was at the point of being a star we all are full of what's necessary. not all of us has a light. you can't just ...

4.13. In the springest day of spring pollen in air trust-falls, scattered but bundled, wept endlessly, for finding relief in the threshold of finding their place in your thoughts, or ...

hello new person on the site and in the threads! your writing is so lovely to read! the sound of the lines flow so well, being quite beautiful to read. ...

4.12. relentless body / reckless self Skin & bones failed to make me whole and whispers when I scream my tongue out in vain; "Did you know a body feels ...

@alliyah - thank you so much! and its reassuring hearing your thoughts on restless night(&day) considering how "out of it" it seems ^_^'. i appreciate that you've been enjoying my ...

these poems so interesting, and lovely to read! i love the metaphors scattered through your poetry, especially how very particular they can be (ex: "the purr of his voice / ...

your poetry is so written beautifully! it's endearing how so honest they are; being so grounded while making the mundane seem more profound or have a hidden deep meaning ("everything ...