lakegirls

Hi, This is my first time that I have ever looked at pictures on YWS. I really liked yours, I loved how you made a series of pictures, sort of ...

Hi, This story is based on partially real events. Dakota, Rory and Delilah were best friends, they told each other everything, secrets, dreams and even fears. That was in Junior ...

Hi, I see that you are a new member, so first off welcome to YWS! I hope you will soon love this place as much as I do, but hopefully ...

Hi, I really loved your characters Marissa and Daisy! I hope to read more of this! PM me if you need anything! Love, N

Hi, I liked this story, even though it made me sad :( I felt for Ally right from the beginning of the story, which is sometimes tricky for people to ...

Hi, I liked your poem. I'm not very good at poetry myself, but I do enjoy reading it! It was very imaginative, I wish my imagination good wander that far. ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this piece. I see that no one else has commented so I will be the first to tell you that it is extremely well done. I ...

Hi, So to start off, this story is not what I expected, which in my opinion is always good, I love the air of a surprise! Your writing was well ...

Hey, All fixed up! See you soon :) Love, N

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Prologue I was a widow; I had been for sometime, four years to be exact. My husband died with cancer to the brain and was sick a year before he ...

Hi, This might be a little rough, but I manged to jot down a few words through my sniffles. Based on a true story. The wind blew up against the ...

Hi, Thanks for your help, but I already have the essay completed. I received a 72%, it would have been an 82% but I handed in a day late. I ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! First off I don't think this is in the right place, try moving it to fiction, unless you plan on turning it into a story. While ...