lakegirls

publishing soon!

This is my new beginning! I'm not sure if I should include this in chapter one or if I should have it before chapter one and add more! Opinions? Friendship, ...

The prologue is my three main characters (they're in grade six at the time) discussing how they want to have a contest to see who can go the longest without ...

Hey everyone! So I'm almost done my first novel and I let one of my friends read it and they said that the beginning wasn't 'dramatic' enough, like there wasn't ...

hey everyone so this is kind of random, but it is about writing haha. I have three names in mind for a character in my book and I wanted everyone's ...

Hey :) I haven't been on here in a while and decided to come and do a nice review for you! First off, I really loved your poem! The emotion ...

Hi, just wondering if you think this has a more childlike voice to it? Rain fell from the grey sky, falling on my jacket and tangling my hair as I ...

So, this question is hard to explain so I thought I'd give an example. Example :) : Rain rushed from the gray sky, falling on my jacket and tangling my ...

Hi, thanks everyone for all the great reviews! I found them all very helpful & am working out some of the kinks now. I know a lot of people say ...

I really liked this piece, it was fairly short but it kept my interest the entire time. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors as I read it, ...

On hot, hot summer mornings, when the sun was so bright it could melt a popsicle down it’s stick and onto my already messy hands, I was allowed lemonade for ...

On hot, hot summer mornings, when the sun was so bright it could melt a popsicle down it’s stick and onto my already messy hands, I was allowed lemonade for ...

Hey there! So I haven't done a critique in ages, probably close on to 6 months, but here I am, ready to pick it up again! I'm going to copy ...

I haven't written anything in a while, but I found some inspiration. Tear it up you guys! :)

Kindergarten and first grade they were the best of friends, Up until grade seven, that’s when the trouble began. She developed feelings but he didn’t feel the same way, He ...