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That's a good point Rosey! I was thinking about it more last night & "What's up?" fits the situation perfectly even though it isn't something I would say!

I don't really like it either because it's sort of vague but in this situation it works. The two characters are in the middle of making out & one of ...

I think "What's up" works best! One of my characters, April, goes to the washroom & her friend, Daniel, notices that something in wrong when she comes out so I ...

Hey all! So as you can see from my title I need help with phrases. What's another phrase for "Are you okay?" I don't want to use "What's wrong?" or ...

Congrats @BunnyBot8! Your essay's are very well written and they kept my interest throughout :) Excellent job!

Congrats Laure! You are seriously talented :)

Hello there! Recently it was brought to my attention, by a critique from a friend, that one my main characters grins too much. Normally this wouldn't concern me, I've learned ...

Thanks so much guys! This really helps :)

Hello! I just had a quick question about writing a phone conversation in a novel. I know there are several different ways you can do it, i.e. just a regular ...

Wow! I didn't even know I was up for this haha, I'm honored! Congrats to @ComicalCrafty and thanks for the nomination!

Hey so I'm just looking for some tips on how to describe your novel? I know what it's about but I have a hard time condensing it. I'm asking because ...

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Hey! Could you review my first & second chapter? Here's the link for chapter one & there's a link for chapter two in a comment on chapter one. -Nicole

This definitely helps! I get what you're saying, it would bug me too! Thanks for the help :)

Thank-you!