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Actually, that is what I was going for.

Hey Kelsi, it's me, send this to me so I can run through spell check, also, i'm going to tell you this tomorrow, oh well, i only got a page ...

I did think about this, but it's not a true story, also, i already moved it twice i don't want to annoy people, lol

Daddy's Little Girl We used to curl up on the couch and watch Blues Clues until the streetlights came on. He use to kiss my forehead good-night and tuck me ...

I agree that it is not poetry, early on i did have it in short story and it was only my first time on this site. I do think it ...

Wow, I never read a story about two gay guys before. I think when two guys are in-love it's totally sweet. I really did and truly like this story. One ...

Hey, Again, excellent job on this piece. I did notice something but it's not that big and i'm not even sure if you need to change it. I sigh, pick ...

Hey, Good work on this piece. These are the kinds of stories that i like reading. I have only read the first chapter but i'm going to read the other ...

Wow! That was amazing, never, well in a long, time have i looked at something and wished that i have written. Though, i don't know if i could write a ...

What the other people said are right, please double space your work or people will not want to read it. I didn't really want to finish it because of it ...

Hey, I thought this story was funny, it was really cool, how you still used some of the things from the fairy tale. All the spelling mistakes (I know it ...

Honestly, I have no clue :lol: It just kind of came to me, i think about these characters a lot, so it was easy.

Yes I did, and i know, lol, i'm trying to change her a bit. I really don't want her to come off as either one of those. Any suggestions on ...

Please write reviews for this, i really need to know what people think, so i will know if i should keep going or if i should just stop.! :D

I really liked this poem, it reminded me of Fawkes in Harry Potter! Keep up the good work! :D