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  • General Fiction Novels Re: first chapter of novel

    Hi, I know i shouldn't reply if i have not read the whole story, but it is a tad bit boring. i have tried to read it 3 times already. ...

    Feb 5, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Phoenix

    Hi, I'm reviewing this again because when I read something I generally try to review it because it irritates me so much when someone reads something belong to me and ...

    Feb 5, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Teenager

    Hi, This poem was a cute little read. I liked the repetition in it! I didn't really understand this part though: "You're old and boring, you don't understand me!" I've ...

    Feb 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love

    Hi, I thought this poem was really cute and sweet. It seemed a bit short to me though. I think that you could make it longer, just have that be ...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: No title Chapter one: tears of remebrance

    Hi, Well, this is a good piece, but not for a beginning. I have no idea who these people are. I can't say much, because this is how I posted ...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Lake Girls Notes

    I know, It is kind of foggy on who some of the people are. I'm going to post something else, kind of giving a general idea on who the people ...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Deleted

    Hi, When I first started reading your story, I loved it! I love whole teacher, student thing. I live for books like that. It started to scare me a bit ...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A Dance To Remember!

    Thanks, it is probably one of my worst stories :P It is not one bit like any of the characters, but it was fun to write! -lg*

    Feb 4, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Lake Girls Notes

    I know this seems like a lot to read, and i'm not telling you to read, it's just for that people who like Lake Girls can take a look through ...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Lake Girls Notes

    Lake Girls Notes Freshmen’s: 14-15 Sophomores: 15-16 Juniors: 16-17 Seniors: 17-18 *** Words: Audaciously- Boldly Haughtily- sounding like a princess Ohmigod- oh my god Cooed Ciao Primly *** Tattooâ

    Feb 4, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A Dance To Remember!

    Kelsi...

    Feb 4, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dear Dairy...

    There is going to be a story line in her next entry, but it was her first entry and she was upset that her Grandmother gave her a diary instead ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dear Dairy...

    Dear Journal, Even though the front cover of this stupid book says dairy (I could never spell that word) you are know a Journal, because of that fact that every ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 1 of Pepita Borrico

    I like this piece, the story line of it. I think you should make it more personal though, yes, that is the type of thing she would write in her ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: why did it happen to me?

    Hi, Again, excellent with the plot for the story, but remember to run through your spell check :wink: The story was alright, it seemed like you were in a rush ...

    Feb 2, 2008


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