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Hi, I really liked this poem. You told the truth about war. I honestly do not get the point of war. It's completely stupid. My favorite line was: The blood ...

Hi, I honestly think it has to do with what has been done. Like example, if 3 girls are somewhere and the two girls want to take their older sister's ...

Hi, Please space before you post. It makes it hard for th other readers to read. Please space then I will crit and read :) -lg* pm me if you ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! This the best site to post all your writing ideas. I only joined in January and I'm already in love with this site. So, this is ...

Hi, I liked this poem. It was very interesting and different. I didn't get why he did it at the beginning, i liked how, (no offense) it was a stupid ...

Hi, Excellent job on this piece. Really good writing. There is not much for me to crit. I really wasn't expecting him to be a boy. I thought it was ...

Hi, I liked this poem. Did you know that someone else wrote a poem called waiting as well? Anyways I really liked both. My favorite line had to be: The ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. It was really sweet. I can relate to this poem, which I like because there are not many out there that you can relate ...

Hi, Wow, this poem was good. I kind of startled me when I read f*cking though. I do curse myself ,but never heard it in a poem like that. You ...

Hi T. Wow, this is one of your better poems. I like this better then mixed singles. It was so sweet and I know it wasn't based on a true ...

Hey, So I guess we just post our photos.

Hi, Very well done. It was short and sweet. It's nice once in a while to read stories like this. There is not much else I can say. I thought ...

Hi, Your story looks really good. I can't read it though, I can't read that font. I don't mean to be rude, but please change the font, i promise i ...

Hi, Wow! This story is funny, i loved it. Like someone said early though, it's in the wrong section. Where did you ever come with an idea like this? I ...

Hi, For your first time writing poetry, it is really well done. I am not much poetry person. I really enjoyed this though! My favorite line has to be: Smoke ...