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Okay, so I'll try this, um Gwenevire is know for writing a lot of fantasy fiction, I really don't know what your know for, sorry. Give me an idea! Love, ...

Hi, So this is what I have for my speech so far, please tell me what I can make better. It is not finished, I still did not put feeling ...

Hi, These are some pictures of my dog (Keisha) and my bunny (Violet). Keisha is 10, soon going to be eleven, and Violet is almost one. I'm not sure what ...

Hi, This really bugs me. I am a Caucasian and I hate when people call me a white. My skin is no were near being white, having white is like ...

Hi, I'm white and I don't think there should be a white history month nor a black for that matter. I don't get why the blacks have a white history ...

Hi, The reason this site was made was for people to critic your work. If you can't take criticism then you can't be a writer. If you go to publisher ...

Hi, This story was very well written, I hope you plan on writing more. I'm not going to pick apart your story like everyone else, just watch for your grammar ...

Hi, Wow these are good drawings, your really talented. I really liked that pic you took too, the on from camp was it? Love, N

Hi, I'm going to add myself to this story because I love Hogwarts. Name: Noelle Nickname: N Gender: Female Hair: black, midway down back Skin:White Eyes: blue, green, depending on ...

Hi, So I'm going to fix up your work for you! My Library Boyfriend With my new Topshop bag slung round my shoulder, and my hair bouncing off my shoulders, ...

Hi, I have a tip for you. If you space out your work more people will red it. When people write it like this: I mope in through the backdoor, ...

Hi, I haven't looked though all the pages of this site, but I was wondering what people thought of an abortion? For me, it all depends on the situation, but ...

Hi, That was excellent! I really liked it! How much more are you going to write? I didn't see anything wrong with it, just watch your grammar. I really liked ...

Hi, I honestly think it has to due with what is done. Like we learned in Language arts class. You wouldn't go kill someone if they were driving drunk or ...

Hi, Very interesting story. I really enjoyed it. I did notice a few mistakes though: “Oh, no”, she breathed. *** “What happened at that home?” the police chief asked. You ...