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Best Non-fiction: Diary by Strawberrywine

Hi, This story was very interesting. It kept me hooked. It would be cool if you added on more and told about your own parents and told who matty was. ...

Hi, I also agree with everyone. It was Romeo and Juliet's fault, considering that they committed suicide . We have talked about this a bit in language class. I think ...

Hi, Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing. I am a little freaked out though, because I am going through the exact same things. I mean exactly. I can ...

Hi, Wonderful poem. It was very pretty. I really liked. It was a nice short read. Make sure you re-read your work before posting it. Then you can find grammar ...

Hi, This story is really well done, Kels. I really like. I'm glad that you put it in other fiction. It is a really good story, but it wasn't really ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! This is the best site to post your work and read other peoples. I thought I would critc your work, no one else has. Make sure ...

Hi, Extremely Hilarious! I have never read anything quite this funny before. I have to admit that when I first started reading it, I thought it was a bit strange, ...

Hi, Excellent job on this poem. I really liked it. It's hard to find good poetry :wink: I am not very good at poetry myself, so I will not be ...

Bubbles

Hi, I don't write a lot of poems, so I tried one too see how it turned out. I personally don't think it's one of my best, but you guys ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. It was a good piece. I liked the part about the remote control, it stood out from the rest of the poem! I didn't ...

Hi, This is just a random part in this story that I started. It kind of just popped into my head, I don't know what I'm going with it yet. ...

Hi, I'm not going to crtic, because a few people all ready did and because I didn't find any mistakes. I really liked this story, I'm not really into to ...

Hi, This was really well written. I'm not going to correct your mistakes Gwenevire & GryphonFledgling (sorry it was a typo)already did. So I will just simply tell you what ...