lakegirls

Hi, I see that no one else has had the chance to critique yet, so I will be the first. I never truly understood what it felt like to lose ...

Hi, People please comment, I need all the help I can get on this novel :) Love, N

Chapter three: May & June “Morning my loves,” June Fisher sang as she sat down on a bar stool next to Brooke who now smelled fresh like Pomegranate and was ...

Hi, This always happens to me. I go to comment on a poem and everything is already said that could be said. The only thing I can say to you ...

Hi, I wanted to tell you how much I liked your story. I did however notice a few mistakes but after reading over the comments I noticed that they have ...

Hey, So this is the second chapter. Comments please. I still have some trouble with tenses and grammar, so please help anyway you can. Love, N Chapter two: Four hours ...

Hi, Your story was very well written. It really made me feel for both characters of the story. I can't say much else because everyone else has pretty much covered ...

Hi, I liked to say that this story was very well written and the imagery was phenomenal. I liked how there was no dialouge in the begining though, I never ...

Hey, Thank you for the reviews. I just fixed it up. My computer is down, but I do have chapter 2 and 3 completed. It's at my friends house, but ...

Hi, This is fourth try for the beginnig of Lake Girls. This one is defiantly my favorite. I have done a lot of tweeking, so please tell me if there ...

Hi, Thank you for the review! There were a few things that you were not very clear about. 1.Brooke took a small sip of her wine and smiled at her ...

Hi, I really need people to review this for me. I need to know if I should still keep writing. If it is okay to go on with this. PLEASE ...

*Please don't use full caps in your title.* Hi, this chapter isn't finished, but I wanted people to tell me what they think before I go on. -Nicole Chapter One: ...

Hi, So everyone pretty much took care of all the fixing mistake things. I really can't say anything, everyone did it for me. :lol: I really liked your story, it ...

Hi, I haven't critc' in a while. I'm not going to say much, about this. I really like it, very creative. I really liked the perspective you took. We chose ...