lakegirls

Hi, Loved it! I couldn't agree more. She uses words that don't fit and stuff over again. If you ever do a sequel to this I have something that she ...

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Hi, All I can say is strange but wonderful. I never really thought of Bellatrix anything other then evil. I like it, keep writing. I love HP fan-fiction :) Love, ...

Hi, Your poem has so much potential, but why make it so short? It could have so much more! And where is the description? I wake. Silver in the morning ...

Hi, I liked it. It was cute. My friend will die when she sees this. She is obsessed with turtles. :) Love, N

Hi, This is my first time doing a narrative poem, so it may not be the best. I have some Elizabethan words. I really like the affect it has on ...

Hi, I can fully understand why these two books are compared even though they have only but one thing in common. That would be: The Two biggest series of all ...

Ghostly silk sheets hang over the moon, Dimming the little light. No one else is here, Shattering my little hope. A leaf falls in a puddle, Rippling the water. Laughter ...

Hi, Very good job on expressing emotion in the poem! We lost power but it was alright We got a generator and once again our lights shone bright. The second ...

Hi, There is something that has been bugging me for the past while; the name of my novel. Lake Girls is the name now, but so far the only mention ...

Hi, So this is the new and improved addition. I'm hoping that this will be good. Tell me what you think! Love, N Ghostly silk sheets hang over the moon ...

Hi, I see your new here, so I'll try not to be too harsh :) I'm going to critic your story in the document then re-post it here, so you ...

Hi, I see no one has criticed your work yet so I will have the pleasure of being first. Once upon a time in a dank and dilapidated village in ...

Hi, Everyone started writing when they were so young! I only started when I was 12! :shock: I was a late bloomer I guess. I did write before, only for ...

Hi, I am currently writing a novel and I am debating weather the girls should smoke or not. I do not smoke myself have no intention too, but if I ...