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Hi, I'm entering my story in a contest so it needs to be top notch. It is an excerpt from a novel, so things are going a bit slow. If ...

Hi, I'm entering my story in a contest so it needs to be top notch. It is an excerpt from a novel, so things are going a bit slow. If ...

I know it's the day before and I should have posted it early, but I had someone who was going to look at it, and I've been trying to get ...

Please, someone tell me that this is okay. I am this state of mind that this sucks and every time I look at I want to change it. I have ...

Hi, If you are even looking at this I bless you. I am entering a contest and I have to print off everything in one day. I really want another ...

Chapter one: He was working through college You know why I’m sending you there, right Lil? The words my mother had last spoken to me replayed in my head, and ...

Chapter one: He was working through college You know why I’m sending you there, right Lil? The words my mother had last spoken to me replayed in my head, and ...

Hi, I really liked your piece of work. I have one question though, why does it say 'Dear Lucy' then say 'Sincerely, Lucy'. This part confused me, however I am ...

Hi, I'm too tired to write a full review, so I'll do it tomorrow. I know, silly reason to still write a reply, but however, I am. I really liked ...

Justin Blanche walked down the crowded halls of St. Alexander Livingston for girls and boys; he ran a hand through his dark blond tousled hair and stopped in front of ...

Hi, First of all, you shouldn't say that! On this site someone will defiantly read it! Next time just write a bit more, some people will read something short then ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll love this site as much as I do :) First things first, on this site you need to write two reviews for every ...

Hi, This is the first time that I've ever cried from reading a story on this site. If this is your real life, I am terribly sorry and hope that ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I see your new here, but for every piece of work you post, you need to reviews, preferably done before. Also, this needs to be rated ...

Hi, Thank-you! I know I need to add emotion! I am going over it know to see where I can do that. I'll post my edit once I'm done :) ...