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Hi, So this long and might be boring to you novel is hopefully going to be my first. I hope to write 12 books for this series and I know ...

Hi, This is a very interesting piece you have here. Although, reading about the hardship, if you could even call it that, that all slaves went through makes me feel ...

Hi, I have never actually reviewed a narrative poem, so this will be my first. I believe that poetry is free expression, so nothing you have written I think you ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I hope you love this site as much as I do :) This piece is truly intriguing. I really hope that this is not based off ...

Wow. That is all I can say. Though a bit strange at first this story was very well written and intriguing. I think you should defiantly keep the name Child ...

Hi, I see no one has given you a full crtic yet, so I'll do the honour of being your first. Okay, what I'm going to do is copy and ...

Hi, I need a review for my story, Like a Button: Please be as harsh as you want, as this needs much work. The second part more so then the ...

Hi, I'd like a review for my story "Like a Button". The first half I'm pretty please with but the second half needs work. Here is the link: Love, N

Hi, Welcome to YWS! We have a rule here that you must review two pieces before posting something yourself. I read only up to half of your story because it ...

Five Years Later “We thought about putting it there. What do you think, Dakota?” I turned my head towards my best friend, Emma Carter, and glanced at the banner that ...

Hi, Thank-you! I'll be sure to fix that and I will be posting more within the next hour hopefully. I have it written, just not typed up yet :P Love, ...

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Hi, Great story! I love how you thought of it while washing the dishes. I'm horrible for that. I actually have a book that I write all my ideas down ...

Hi, Very intriguing but I think we need a bit more to understand fully what's going on. I get the gist of it; that this girl or guy is someone ...

Hi, Interesting piece. I defiantly want to read more of this. There are a few places I had concerns... will actually nitpicks... Each day I choose a new name, it’s ...