lakegirls

Hi, Everyone has pretty much picked up on the error's that I found so I am just here to praise you. This story was well written and intriguing right to ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! First things first, we have a little rule here that you have to review two stories for every post, just to make sure that everyone's work ...

Thinking about publishing. Had to be deleted.

Anyone should be entitled to marry who they want. There is nothing wrong with a man marrying a man or a woman marrying a woman. The people who are afraid ...

Hi, I really, really liked this story. I think you mentioned that the "end was crappy" but really it is quite good. My English teacher told us about different endings ...

Hi, I have a newer, newer version. I did some editing my self.

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Sorry about that. It's all cleared up now :)

Chapter One: Never the same. Mrs. Brown, we’re sorry… What? What is it? Where’s Will? Mrs. Brown, I – Stop it! Where is he? Just tell me where he is! ...

Hi, I see no one else has gotten a chance to review your story so I am happy to be the first. Before you post something else though, be sure ...

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Deleted. Thinking about publishing. Love, N

Hi, Very good, again. I picked up on a few minor mistakes, but after reading the comments I realized that they were already covered. Keep writing! This is an excellent ...

Hi, Good job on this story. Very cute, very catchy. I can defiantly see it on shelves of a bookstore some day! So onto the review: All my edits, comments ...

Hi, I just finished reading your story, well actually I started today too. You have talent. I really enjoyed this as it was intriguing and easy to relate to. One ...