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Holly Magin seemed like she was a really good cousin. The descriptions and small memories in the poem make the reader want to learn more of the "falling out" between ...

This poem is very well written. Any reader would happily note that you have a very strong idea in your mind and know exactly what you are saying. Stellar descriptions ...

This poem is sweet and bubbly. It reads innocently and can make you feel like a young child. What is funny is that you never say what it is that's ...

First of all this poem was easy to read. Easier to read then it was to follow. Although the poem leads the reader through a serious story with much potential, ...

"what news is worse then that of death" Brilliant line. There is much potential in your words and in the way you write. there is just one thing i can't ...

First of all favorite line is the twist on rhyme or reason. Delightful...simply delightful. I personally loved this poem and believe that all writers who believe in what they are ...

Very interesting poem. i love how at the end you state that you need help, and then emphasize it on the last line by REALIZING you need help. it was ...

Good poem. Worded well and easy to follow. Good Work!!!

Wonderful story! Brilliant way of telling it. Imaginative and novel worthy. Good Work!!!

Hi there! Just wanted to let you know this was a beautiful poem! my favorite lines: she hid it with elegance and a smile splendid, felt like someone's dream. will ...

Yes! sarebear had it absolutely correct! except that the king had two lovers, realizing too late that the one he chose was not the one he loved. Thank you for ...

"ENJOY!!!" Fortuitous not the king So stricken by misgivings And the inconvenience of tomorrow Tameable yet untame Misguided were they both by Misreading unholy vows That carried behind their sweet ...

Damned upon this soil Rotting and gnawing Torn between involuntary spasms of pleading Pleading and decieving For what would i plead for in the soulless vows Of the empty eyed ...