ladymarmalade

I absolutly LOVED this! I love the dynamic rhythm it represents. It shows that people really do show their true colors, usually ones we care not to see. Deception often ...

The last stanza is what really got me. I could just see that scene so vividly and "Crystal Clear". Aha corny pun, my bad. Loved your poem! keep it up! ...

Beautiful. Reminds me of my deceased Grandmother, and how much of an extraordinary person she really was. makes you appreciate your elders all the more. Well done. :D

Really interesting. Definetly caught and kept my attention. Of course it's fairly obvious what it is (not a bad thing at all), but it explains all the factors dreams really ...

This idea came to me since someone who I'm infatuated with, loves to draw. There is of course a hidden meaning. The question is, what is it? It's up to ...

Common question we ask ourselves everyday... why do we really love people? I loved the obvious personal emotion in this even just by using simple words and clever word play. ...

Really cool! Makes me that much more excited for snow to blanket my yard. In many ways Winter really is my favorite time of year. Keep up the GREAT work! ...

I'll admit, I didn't really understand the title until the last stanza. I sense alot of emotion, feeling, and personal vendetta behind this. I very much unsterstand what you're trying ...

Wow, this is AMAZING! This song has always been on the repeat on my Ipod! (Sad, yes I know I have Disney songs on my Ipod) It was artfully created ...

Definetly has plenty of potential. I would love to see a continuation of this. The only issue I had was I couldn't clearly see the plot line. You seem to ...

Wow, really interesting. Not to mention attention grabbing! Reminded me quite a bit of Regina from Mean Girls. Haha, keep on writing this is great, dramatic, and even funny at ...

The courtroom was covered in a blanket of tension. The defense lawyer quickly introduced himself to everyone and named his project Rainsford. Rainsford sat still, emotionless, watching the judge with ...

This was so amazing! I had alot of fun reading it and I'm glad you came up with the idea to do it! It just blends together so perfectly the ...

Really makes you think. I had to read it once or twice to grasp exactly what you were trying to say, but I understand it fully by the end. great ...

Very nice! I'm a sucker for these kind of stories, so this one drew me right it. I almost think you could continue this and make a sweet little story ...