ladyKixRox

Well I had sort of a hard time reading it so i think you should space it out a tiny bit,Especially during the dialogue. Like this... This is based on ...

Greetings Ellie!! I love how with every word i read i had a vivid picture of everything happening. You writing has this certain charisma that just kept me reading and ...

That was just Exquisite! I can literally read all of the thought you put into that. I find British Styled writing so amazing! I mean the things that are done ...

Well I loved it!Well the idea mostly. I saw all of the Irony!The whole thing was ironic to me the structure the mistakes!! I thought it was intentional. As i ...