ladyKixRox

OH. MY. GOSH. THANK. YOU!!! You are precisely the reason i posted this up!! All of my friends didn't want to edit my story so i decided i get a ...

forgive me everyone,i just wanted to let you know it wasnt a poem it was simply a prose. But i chose to post it in the dramatic poetry section. Again ...

That Moment when I laid Hopelessly on my bed.I heard our song.I heard the melody of our sweet sorrow.Every note played on the Piano made me tear. I heard the ...

Full Name: Falon Gender: Female Age: 52 (Elvish equivalent 19 ) Birthplace: Unknown Father's Name: Helien Mother's Name: Robin Race: Elf Eye Color: Silver (With Dark blue Pupils) Hair colour: ...

I love! it was very well put and the transition from good to bad was executed nicely! The ending could have been a little stronger but overall this was a ...

I told him I hated when he used his southern charm on me. I mean, really? He knows I don't like the country, but he slowly changes my mind everyday ...

Well i agree with Snapesonaplane..... The part when she wakes up in a the care of the two males does seem a bit rushed. I dont mind a long read,but ...

Well it is looking good! I definitely need to check out your other works. But in the beginning "Glance" is misspelled.Also I'm a sucker for a killer description! I wanted ...

This poem is so simple its cute! Yes it was flat but its the type of poem to look like it going to build up then its,"oh no sorry didnt ...

I see you have a peculiar way of writing,i like it! You executed it nicely! "You cant know I'm ordinary" i love it! and the whole structure screams I'm not ...

I loved this i mean the analogies were just to die for,but i don't know if you did this on purpose but if you didn't it messed up the rhythm ...

My goodness all of "this" was genius! The ending blew me away! I felt her jealousy of her husbands love for writing his poems. It was just...just so lovely. Everything ...

I agree with JAsmine Hart on this one. Your rhythm could use a bit of work. "That is what the policeman sees As he drives around the cul de sac ...

I would love to join! as an elf though...and if i'm allowed two characters a Japanese shogun! xD!!

Wow,Soo, I'm back! I used to go by Amira15 now its Just LadyKixRox! I was gone for two years!! Yikes! I still see some familiar faces and a whole lot ...