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Alma "well fine i just wanted to make sure!" Scarlett said holding my hands up in surrender. "Dont ask me again, Now can you help me or not like i ...

"Calm down" I said while picking leaves from head. I continued to climb out of the bushed. When i was fully out i dusted my shorts off. The leaves are ...

Oh this is just pleasant and beautiful!! i think this is so cute and perfect!! Wonderful Haiku! ~Lady Kix

Oh my goodness...Your writing was so great it was like i was watching a movie! I honestly forgot i was reading a story for a quick second. This was just ...

Name:Alma Treylor Age:17 Gender:Female Appearance/Picture: Skills: She plays Guitar,and is a computer geek,She also is cross country runner. She's always Dreamed about running in the Olympics but it o

I would just like to resrve a spot!

I loved it the only problem is it was spaced too far. fix that and its perfect! Its a nice blend of Witty and intelligent! I love her attitude!! Keep ...

Hey Bloom! May i call you that! The First thing i noticed was the structure,The Story wasn't formed right,and also your transitioning and your explaining of Adaline's surroundings is quite ...

I pointed out a few mistakes i could find as i read but their was alt of words that were unnecessarily used,as a means to make the story sound more ...

This was so amazing! The love passion and the description was on point! I was captivated and i enjoyed the long thought you put into it because it shows! I'll ...

Aaaw thanks! Do you have any suggestions?? Any thing that needs changes I'm desperate for some criticism! But i will be sure to check out your story! ~Lady Kix

Oh I love how the title explained the ending! Very nice! it sounds like a nursery rhyme! And trust me that's a good thing! Like an adventurous bedtime story that ...

Sup! First off, The poem's idea was great! But the structure was um not so great. At first glance it looks interesting,what with the ABC form,but it made it difficult ...

wow thank you so much!! its Really something how you wrote the same rhyme three times yet they all came out so different! This Helped!

This helps so much!! Now that i can follow a basic ruling!