ladyKixRox

Scarlett was taking a long time to come back. "You Guys we should move the body..." i said solemnly. Everyone agreed and Shawn Liam and i carried the body to ...

Hello!! I love the criticism and i need it!! please Review This ! I'd very much appreciate it! ~Lady Kix

I love this! Everyone has touched on the necessary areas of correction already! but i just needed to comment on how nice short and sweet this was. I loved it! ...

Hello! And welcome to YWS!! Well your poem is nice! The rhythm gets thrown off a bit when with the "Like those flying by" Line at the end of everything. ...

or make a set, like items! Especially for your story,there are item with special jewels that need to be found!! a pen a dagger a bracelet earrings a ring! anything!

My gosh this was such a joy to read! All of that Editing payed off big time! I love this especially the playful free nature of the characters! I love ...

Well borntobeawriter has already pointed out most of the flaws of this story so i guess I'll tell you what you did right! Its very well written and formed. I ...

This is so sweet!! And very well written,I love it! ~Lady Kix

Oh My gosh!! I love your angles and the camera you used! the black and white picture is superb!! I love it! But The first one is my Favorite!

Hello! The prologue is very well written,its just a bit confusing, If you say that all the suspects were murdered the same way,Then at the beginning were they all killed ...

ooh those are cute! Are youplanning on making logo with the jewels?

Alma Scarlett and i caught up with shawn,i was still Pretty shaken up by the gunshots,There was more drama here than where i am used to. I looked at shawn ...

"Sc-Scarlett!" I said to her as she pulled me toward wet people! "I am pretty sure that's not the way to my house." i lied i had absolutely no idea ...

Well the second one i definitely loved!! it looked so professional!!So Darling!!

good! i ant to get started i love this plot!