ladcat13

Can we say that between the first seven pages and our newer storyline is a new day at the tavern? To keep everything in context. I should have gone back ...

Mirayah and Ash slump in their seats, defeated. Only through sheer force of will can they keep their Dragons away. They had heard what the woman with the tome had ...

Mirayah and Ash realize that they have been fooled. The rest of the bar falls asleep in one instant, and they are made painfully obvious by the newcomer's spell. Two ...

Mebbe he means a loading bay or an airlock. Did you notice all the run-ons? My god, was there ANY punctuation at all?

Anog was unable to explain, for just as he went to tell me, an explosion rocked the ship and a scream was heard down the corridor. "Dammit, they're back!" He ...

Mirayah feels a surge of powerful magic rush from the newcomer as they set the glass of water down. She throws up the barriers around her mind and Limok's just ...

The cloaked woman and the man silently nurse their coffee, unnoticed and invisible to the rest of the taproom. Even the hostess seems to have forgotten them, assuming they are ...

Nice, Dante. Too bad I can't say anything to that without spoiling the story. I have to wait for jordin to get his lazy butt on the computer and do ...

The patrons in the bar hear rain pick up outside. The hooded figure, the trembling girl, and the woman who all sat at the corner table stopped talking and listened ...

Arianniss, God of the Redeemers I glared at Ramshaft, waiting for him to gather his thoughts. The death of Captain Raines had shaken me. As he was opening is mouth ...

I know it's long, like, really long, but I had a lot of description to do. No one invented any cities or planets, so I had to create a setting, ...

I assume we have agreed on a POV? First person, past tense? Also, jordin, yours has a lot of run-ons in it. Arianniss, Goddess of the Redeemers: I woke abruptly. ...

NO ONE HAS GONE ON ANY OF THE SB'S IM IN FOR, LIKE, A MONTH!

Here's my Council member: Name: Damien Threndon Age: 45 yrs Appearance: His hair silvered kinda early, he says it runs in the family. He keeps it cut close until the ...

Well then i got dibs on a council member position. U k, i think we shoul really fill that one up. Maybe, like, a human council member for every "civilized" ...