ladcat13

Nah, we would have to change the story dramatically if we cut out a whole faction and twenty-odd council members. I'm too lazy to change it that much.

Mirayah and Ash realize that they have been fooled. The rest of the bar falls asleep in one instant, and they are made painfully obvious by the newcomer's spell. Two ...

Dude, I can't make up more characters! Arianniss and my Council member are my limit. We need Paladins and Council members. I really want this SB to succeed, and there's ...

Ok! Good enough for me. Though, seriously, guys, Arianiss' problems are my problems! "What is it, 'attack the Redeemers day' and I didn't get the memo?!" Why are you all ...

Mebbe he means a loading bay or an airlock. Did you notice all the run-ons? My god, was there ANY punctuation at all?

Oh. So who's attacking The Hero? Or were the two just coincidence? (Don't worry, Arianniss won't find out until due time)

Anog was unable to explain, for just as he went to tell me, an explosion rocked the ship and a scream was heard down the corridor. "Dammit, they're back!" He ...

I is sowwy, ddman. I post non-story in here.

Mirayah feels a surge of powerful magic rush from the newcomer as they set the glass of water down. She throws up the barriers around her mind and Limok's just ...

ME BECAUSE I AM A NINJA. (Jk ;))

The cloaked woman and the man silently nurse their coffee, unnoticed and invisible to the rest of the taproom. Even the hostess seems to have forgotten them, assuming they are ...

Nice, Dante. Too bad I can't say anything to that without spoiling the story. I have to wait for jordin to get his lazy butt on the computer and do ...

The patrons in the bar hear rain pick up outside. The hooded figure, the trembling girl, and the woman who all sat at the corner table stopped talking and listened ...

Arianniss, God of the Redeemers I glared at Ramshaft, waiting for him to gather his thoughts. The death of Captain Raines had shaken me. As he was opening is mouth ...

I know it's long, like, really long, but I had a lot of description to do. No one invented any cities or planets, so I had to create a setting, ...