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Re: My Life As Hanna
Thank for reviewing! First reviewer, I really do want to keep this story going. I think that it could be a hit! And I did get a little inspired by ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: My Life As Hanna
My Life As Hanna “Cut!” yelled the director. My heart dropped and I screamed inside. What was I doing wrong this time? “Chelsea, you need to act surprised when they ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Coal Miner's daughter
Hi! I thought that this was an amazing poem. It sounds like it could be a country song! I think that you could describe yourself in more detail, it is ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: A concept poem
Great poem! Did you mean to put Messiah at the beginning and end of each section of your poem on purpose? I think that it gives it a different sense ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Fly
This is great! You should try to get this to be a popular song! I loved the whole thing. It had such great detail!
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Kasidie's Deal.
I thought that this was an amazing story! It seemed very sad though. I liked the way you described everything in such little detail. I think that you should write ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: The Hollywood Story
“Loser,” Spencer told her. Spencer always called her bad names like that, but Loser was no match to Freckle Head. Chelsea walked away in quick tiny steps screeching the floor. ...
Jan 12, 2011
