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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Clearwater

    To me you said, "the wisest" a bit too much, it got a bit repeditive and started to annoy me. You had a few typos and a couple mistakes, but ...

    Jun 24, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: "Double Dad" chapter 10

    It is a bit short, but I shouldn't say much, my chapter was super short also. You should add more thoughts and description, but other than that its great!

    Jun 24, 2007


You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh