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Re: Draco's first Murder!
Hi, Kyle here. First, I thought it was a good story. It wasn't in Rowling's style and that's okay. Second, I don't think Snape would have been so kind. Third, ...
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Re: Symbiosis
Hi! Kyle here and I guess I'll review your book, I typically don't like gardening. However, This book was truely interesting. I thought there might have been mistakes here and ...
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Re: When His Eyes Came To
Hi! Kyle here. I just wanted you to know before I start reviewing that I have a book under action/adventure if you would please read it. Now to the reviewing. ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: I Was One Of Them
Hi, My name is Kyle, and I am bored at school, so I'll review you, First, Great writing. I thought it was good. Typically, I like battle scenes. I always ...
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Brooklyn Bridge falls
Hi! My name is James Harrison. I am a twelve year-old student on my way to a new foster family. I have belonged to about fifteen family's. Some could say ...
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Re: pygmalion's lament
Very Nice.
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: The Battle
Dude, I have no words to describe it. How long are your class periods? 30-50 minutes probably. If you could build of it and make it into a novel, I ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Cliche
Hi my name is Kyle and I'll gladly review your poem. I have a very close friend and it is kind of like the poem with us (only I ramble, ...
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Re: Lair of Beast
Hey. I thought it was okay, exempt for the bare adjectives. Where did this take place besides a mansion? What was the beast like? What was the old man wearing? ...
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Re: The Flames of Hope
I really liked it. You should try more poetry!
Nov 2, 2010
