kwestion22

Oh! Oh! I know how!! PICK ME PICK ME! Okay, so Beethoven is right. It's different from poetry, but not SO much, just different. It needs a beat, meaning it ...

I had no problem understanding it (I live in the US) so no worries about it not being clear. I like it, actually. I got chills at one part.

Little Sister Jasmine was twelve years old, and obnoxious. For the longest time, I wanted nothing to do with her. Her skin was this gorgeous deep brown, with maroon tints, ...

Ahh, so many sweet people! Snoik, we're pretty close. I live near Berkeley/Oakland :D ! Thanks everyone for welcoming me, ahh the warm fuzzies :D

Thanks :) I actually redid it this afternoon, so I am editing and putting the new version in now :D Thank you for replying! ETA: haha you might want to ...

I enjoyed certain parts of that poem a LOT. "Or slither through my journal And whine like a child" was good imagery. I feel like the last stanza isn't final ...

Aww, thank you! haha, the font has to be size twelve I believe. I actually spent fourty five minutes debating with myself on whether or not I could get away ...

Thank you Qiguaigongfu! I really appreciate your reply. I am definetly going to take your suggestions! The problem is that I am sending this in to a school that has ...

Wow, I think this could be a totally awesome poem. The idea of it is great! I get what you're trying to get across, but the thing is, the rhymes ...

This is a short story loosely based on my mother's life. I say "loosely" because in the story, things turn out much differently than they did in real life. I ...

Hi! I'm so happy to have found this website. My name's Sofia, and I'm 16 years old. I live in California and have been writing since I was eight years ...

The first stanza was just amazing - afterwards though, it seemed like the rhymes became forced.

I liked the idea you were trying to get across, but it sounded a little bit cliche. I think that you have a good idea in your mind though, and ...

Hello all! This is my first post ever here, I just joined, and I figured I'd post a few poems. It's important to me that I get honest feedback, because ...