kudzugenius

I like it. One question: What is the rhythym you are using? I can quite figure out the beat. Not really a comment as much as it is a question ...

The flow of this poem is very traditional, and there is nothing like going back to the basics. I would like a little more clarification on who the person you ...

[Quote= "Yes, I'll take that one please," she said as she pointed at a pure and beautiful alexandrite ring. It was sparkling in the bright Sunday sunlight. She hoped it ...

By the way guys, call me Jacob. :D

Well, I was going to post another poem ,nut people wanted a better version of "The Two of Us". I am still testing some new ways of punctuating to add ...

Sorry, I thought I had made at least three reviews. Thanks for the critique. I really couldn't figure out a real scheme. I just let it flow.

No time was right, but no time was truly wrong, I tried so hard, to comprehend why... I had waited so long, The time was close, yet somehow a bit ...

I'm crying.........still crying..........ok I'm done. Beautiful.

I'm actually crying. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? Ok, now for critique you capitalized the "C" in countered. That is all for grammar. Why is it that you just say weak spot instead of ...

Naturally, the answer to any questions with the option "Pat Buchanan" shall be answered with "Pat Buchanan" or Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis, but that is only if one's inner conscience

Thank you for the positive criticism. I plan to write more on the topic. Hopefully by the end I will have made the story as clear as possible without revealing ...

Sorry to :smt064 . Got to say one last thing. I didn't mean for this to rhyme at first. This is the exact chronological order to me being turned down ...

Thanks for the comments guys. I am technically not new, but this is my first post. I will definitely try to add more but, I am a haiku and short ...

First we walked, Then we talked, We were mocked, But honestly, Those times rocked

Awesome, but you said "I know he can't me." I don't know ifnthis is just how they should speak or if you meant to say have or anything else. Truly ...