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Re: Truthseeker: Chapter 1
When I copied it to Microsoft Word, it displayed at Times New Roman. I don't know why it doesn't look like that here. How do I change it to make ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: The Frontier
Too be honest, it is a bit confusing. There's too much information in the last paragraph. Try adding more dialogue. Why does the ruler of the US want to take ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Silent Harmony-Chapter One
I thought chapter one was pretty good. I like the idea of three different groups corresponding to the primary colors and the three other group made up of secondary colors. ...
Oct 16, 2007
