kris

Figures crowed my tear swollen eyes. Everyone in my life whom I've loved; all the enemies that I still despise. Every now and then, when I have the time. I ...

What about Guy Fawkes? One of the most infamous traitors of English history. Rome has many, many well documented ( and high profile) traitors. Love Kris x

I see that you are new to our little community; let me first extend my sincerest welcome to you, before I get down to business... WELCOME TO YWS WOOOOP! WOOOOP! ...

Hey there :D Firstly, this is an interesting piece of writing. However, it is not really a poem. It's more like prose. There is too little structure or metre for ...

Come on guys :P any help on offer? x

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(just experimenting with structure here, so please look at it objectively :D ) Cut me with your silence! ... Sharper than any word could be polished to. You used to ...

I hate my poems, They’re pretty shit. So harsh to read- As skin is to grit. My work is horrid, Alas it really is. It grates against me, Simply writing ...

Act 1 – scene 2/4 Performance time: Scene 1 - 8minutes (entire play 60mins). Rob – Morning … love… hmmm *Giggles a little to himself* I’d ask you if you ...

Hi there, my dearest poet. I thought that your poem had a very interesting structure and metre. It was refreshing to read a poem that was a little different. The ...

This poem, my love was thoroughly marvellous by almost every measure. The metre was just how I like it; restrained, uncomplicated and slightly flexible. What I mean by that is ...

why do people think that caring - is a way of making ends? What's wrong with sharing kindness? Whats wrong with being friends? I admit that your good-looking, I concede ...

A Rapier is also a type of sword used in fancing... Not commonly mind. Rapier generally refers to a relatively long-bladed sword characterized by a complex hilt which is constructed ...

I can't say that I'm very keen on this poem... It's a bit much like an essay with stanzas. It lacks any definate flow or metre, or even rhyme - ...

Act1 - Scene 1/4 Performance time: Scene 1 - 8minutes (entire play 60mins). Rob - Hi my name is Robert Josef Fitz-William... Well Robber to those to know me, but ...